On Friday it was Elm Park’s 50th birthday. It was a very hot day. It was a very fun day. We all went to the auditorium. We all dressed up and our teacher too. It was very noisy. I saw colours. I was scared. Did you like Elm Parks birthday? Yes. It was a very fun day. It was the best day every. I like school.
"I am good at story writing. I am proud of myself for using the words from my brainstorm in my writing. Next time I could try to use more describing words. "
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It is great to read your stories Jenny. You have used lots of great describing words. I love the question you used in your writing today.
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